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- Ezra Nicolo Antonio
Have you heard about a man who wasted his life when the girl he loves, died? Nowadays, people are wasting their lives when they lose someone in their life. The truth is, whatever happens, you should continue your life because that someone will not be happy because he will think that it is his fault why you wasted your life. God has better plans for you, plans that you should wait and plans that you should cherish when it comes.
In this story, Marcus lost his job because of Arah, his girlfriend. He doesn’t want to work because his mind is focused to Arah. It is just fine for him to lose his job because I think, he was just playing. He did not make himself busy, instead he wasted his life, which is not good for him. While the story is going on, I felt pain because it is really hard to lose someone you are used to text, call or used to be with. This story really made me cry at the last part because I didn’t expect that the accident will lead Arah to death and will lead Marcus in wasting his life.
If I were in his place, I’m sure my life wouldn’t be the same if I lose someone in my life that I am used to be with. It will be hard for me to move on, if I know it to myself that I really love the person, but my life should go on and I know that God will be right beside me, watching and guiding me to which path I should take.
STRENGTHS:
· The title is attractive.
· The whole story is amazing.
· It inspires people not to waste their life when they lose someone they love.
· The situation of Marcus really happens nowadays.
· It made some people cry.
WEAKNESSES:
In this story, Marcus lost his job because of Arah, his girlfriend. He doesn’t want to work because his mind is focused to Arah. It is just fine for him to lose his job because I think, he was just playing. He did not make himself busy, instead he wasted his life, which is not good for him. While the story is going on, I felt pain because it is really hard to lose someone you are used to text, call or used to be with. This story really made me cry at the last part because I didn’t expect that the accident will lead Arah to death and will lead Marcus in wasting his life.
If I were in his place, I’m sure my life wouldn’t be the same if I lose someone in my life that I am used to be with. It will be hard for me to move on, if I know it to myself that I really love the person, but my life should go on and I know that God will be right beside me, watching and guiding me to which path I should take.
STRENGTHS:
· The title is attractive.
· The whole story is amazing.
· It inspires people not to waste their life when they lose someone they love.
· The situation of Marcus really happens nowadays.
· It made some people cry.
WEAKNESSES:
· Some words are hard to understand.
· The story is short that makes people say ‘nakakabitin’.
· I don’t know what happened to Marcus after that flashback.
· The story is short that makes people say ‘nakakabitin’.
· I don’t know what happened to Marcus after that flashback.